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Don Goede's avatar

For me, this poem feels almost biblical in its meditation on endings — like Ecclesiastes, where everything has its season, and Revelation, where the world trembles at the edge of judgment. The idea that someone might write not only their last poem, but the last poem, is haunting.

What stands out is the contrast between destruction and beauty: mushroom clouds, fire, storms, and silence set against gardenias, sunsets, and remembered trees. The final line — “will the cut worm forever resent the plow?” — feels like a proverb about suffering, fate, and the mystery of forces larger than ourselves.

Overall, it reads as a dark but thoughtful reflection on extinction, memory, and the last fragile voice of humanity.

Dave Alden Hutchison's avatar

This is amazing, Henry. A profound rumination on the last poem ever that took my breath away. I've been feeling this general zeitgeist myself, but to assuage my own fear, wrote "the pub at the end of all time" where the mother god is about to allow the world to be destroyed, but when she sees people living it up in their final days, changes her mind deciding there's something worth keeping in it. I personally lean into the idea we have a bit of free will and the world demands we use it for good, but that higher powers will see the seed of consciousness through any storm of our making or otherwise. In my (too sunny?) view, there will never be a last poem - though perhaps a last poem on earth and that alone is heart-wrenching.

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